Part 4 (Final): The Man Who Rated Every Sunset a 7/10
A year to the day since Nadia's first comment on his account, Desmond arrived at their usual bench with his notebook, exactly as always, though Nadia noticed he seemed considerably more nervous than his typical relaxed demeanor.
"You're fidgeting," she observed. "You never fidget. Even that time you accidentally gave a sunset a negative score, you remained perfectly composed."
"That was a rounding error, and deeply regrettable," Desmond said, though his attempted deflection lacked his usual confident delivery. "I have something to show you tonight. A special posting, if you will."
He opened his phone, showing her a draft post he'd clearly been preparing carefully a photo of tonight's sunset, still forming, alongside a caption unlike anything he'd ever posted before.
Final rating pending. Currently negotiating whether tonight deserves a perfect score, contingent entirely on someone's answer to a question I'm about to ask.
"Desmond" Nadia started, understanding dawning.
He knelt carefully in front of the bench, retrieving a small ring from his jacket pocket, sunset light catching warmly against the metal.
"A year ago, you commented on a photo, accusing me of harsh sunset criticism," he said, voice steadier now despite obvious emotion. "I've spent every evening since profoundly grateful you did. You turned a strange, therapeutic ritual into something genuinely meaningful, something I actually look forward to every single day, rather than simply enduring as scheduled self-care. Nadia, will you marry me?"
Tears spilled freely down Nadia's cheeks as she pulled him up into her arms. "Yes," she said immediately, laughing and crying simultaneously as the sunset blazed spectacularly behind them. "Completely, genuinely, yes."
Desmond slipped the ring onto her finger, then turned back toward the sunset, still visible behind them in its full, brilliant glory.
"Well," he said, glancing at his phone's draft post, "I believe this settles the pending rating question entirely."
He typed quickly, finalizing the caption before showing it to her: 10/10. Absolutely perfect. Considerable bias involved, given she said yes, but I maintain the score is entirely, objectively justified.
"Your followers are going to lose their minds," Nadia said, laughing as she read the caption.
"Let them," Desmond said, pulling her close. "I've been building toward this exact, perfect score for an entire year. I think it's earned."
They married the following spring, their wedding held, appropriately, during golden hour on the very pier where their unlikely relationship had first properly begun. Desmond's final wedding-day sunset post read simply: Rating system officially retired. Nothing will ever top this one.
As they danced together beneath the fading evening light, surrounded by friends, family, and much to their amusement several strangers who'd traveled specifically to witness the conclusion of "Sunset Couple's" year-long, deeply beloved internet romance, Nadia understood profoundly that sometimes the most absurd, seemingly pointless rituals could lead toward the most genuine, unexpected happiness imaginable.
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